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Bonjour
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais ( ci-dessous) et j'aimerai savoir s'il y a des fautes ou des erreurs de formulation. Ce texte est une demande de location d'échange d'appartement.
Je remercie d'avance la personne qui saura m'aider.
Cordialement

Good evening Tina,

I hope you are doing well!
We are planning a trip to New York, between the 10th and the 20th of March. The photos of your beautiful apartment, your description, and the wonderful neighborhood really make me want to stay at your place.

I will be coming with my partner (an accountant). As for me, I work in real estate. We are both non-smokers and very respectful of others' property.

Hoping that Paris Trocadéro appeals to you, I offer you my apartment where I would be delighted to host you in return, either on the same dates or non-simultaneously if you prefer to come later.
I can also offer you Guest points.

I am also available to provide more information about us.
Hoping to receive your response soon.
I wish you a good day.
Thank you

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Bonsoir, voici ton texte avec les 3 modifications que j'y ai apportées !

Good evening Tina,

I hope you are doing well !

We are planning a trip to New York between the 10th and 20th of March. The photos of your beautiful apartment, your description, and the wonderful neighborhood really make me want to stay at your place.

I will be accompanied by my partner, who works as an accountant. As for me, I work in real estate. We are both non-smokers and very respectful of others' property.

I hope you find Paris Trocadéro appealing. I am offering my apartment and would be delighted to host you in return. We can discuss the dates, either simultaneous or non-simultaneous, according to your preference.

I am also available to provide more information about us.

Hoping to receive your response soon. I wish you a good day. Thank you.

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